The table illustrates data about earnings of senior grade's tutors in states as Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan, Korea during 2009

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of secondary school teachers in 2009 based in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea. We can conclude some interesting phenomenons from the above data

through

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comparing their salaries by looking into their initial salary, income after 15

years

of

services

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, the maximum payment and the

years

it takes to reach the top salary. Surprisingly, the

western

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countries do not necessarily offer the top

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package even though Luxembourg tutors received the highest return - no matter

they

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were at the beginning of

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career

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, 15

years

workmanship

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or the salary ceiling. Tutors in Korea, Japan and Denmark followed respectively on the income ranking.

On the other hand

, Australian teachers vice versa were rewarded with the lowest salaries. Other than the numerical return, the

years

it took to reach the top manifests a different trend. Denmark teachers were the fastest who hit the ceiling, it took them 8

years

.

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Meanwhile

, it took 37

years

for the Japanese, making it the slowest out of all.

To conclude

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which

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in which

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the educators work

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impacts their

prospect

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greatly.