You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: apologise for damaging the item of clothing explain how it became damaged say what you will do to fix the problem

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Dear George, I'm sorry to be writing with some bad news. I have to tell you that the ski jacket you lent me got torn

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I was on holiday. I feel terrible as it was so generous of you to let me borrow it, and want you to know how sorry I am. The jacket got torn when I was getting it out of the back of the van; it was caught on something, and I kept pulling at it, not realising that the fabric was ripping. It's now got a massive tear down the sleeve and I think it's too big to mend. George, I feel really awful about

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and hope you will understand. Please know that I'll replace it when I get home. You can come out with me to the shops and choose another one - even a more expensive

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you want! I do hope you can forgive me; I didn't mean to be careless. I'll be in touch as soon as I'm back next month. Bye for now, Jesse

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: ﻿﻿apologise for damaging the item of clothing ﻿﻿explain how it became damaged ﻿﻿say what you will do to fix the problem

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You recently borrowed an item of clothing from a friend. While you had this item, it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: apologise for damaging the item of clothing explain how it became damaged say what you will do to fix the problem