The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.

This

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line chart depicts the average

number

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of British travellers in millions over a period of 6 decades using different transportation modes (

car

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, train ,

bus

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) . It's clear from the graph that the

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of travellers

use

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cars and

trains

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has increased over the

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.

while

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the

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of

bus

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commuters has declined throughout the

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.

According to

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what is shown, in the 70s - 80s decades , the average rate of both

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and travellers

were

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between 4 - 5

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.

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trains

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accounted for only 2

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passengers

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. The

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of commuters who used cars increased sharply from 1980 - to 2000,

whereas

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the total

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were used

trains

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was exactly 3

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. In the following 10

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, constant patterns were observed for both cars and

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at 7

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and 3

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respectively. In 2030 ,

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users reach a peak among these vehicles.

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,in the first. 30

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ago the

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of

bus

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passengers

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slightly decreased to 4

million

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. From 2000 to 2010, the rate of

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passengers

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continued to decline . In 2010, the pattern showed a gradual drop at 3

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until the end of the period.

To sum up

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,

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and train were shown

similarly

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increasing patterns

while

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bus

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the bus

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was shown

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in the

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opposite direction.