Students at schools and the university learn far more from lessons with the teachers than from other source (such as internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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important factor for diverse information.
Students
at schools and
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university
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get to learn more from the topics covered
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the
teachers
than from other sources
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two ways. They are
internet
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and television.
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, some
students
believe that attending classes and
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listening to the
teachers
are the only
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of learning. I agree with
this
point.
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,
teachers
and professors
take
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lectures on their subject on
daily
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a daily
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basis class for the
students
but
students
gain more knowledge
while
they surf
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the
internet
and do
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while
they get the gist of the topic when listening to the teacher. Most of the autonomous
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are based on
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where the
students
are more
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indulged
in activities rather than attending the lectures taken by the tutor.
Secondly
, some educators
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considerably
have enough of
knowlegde
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knowledge
with the field of years they have been working.
Teachers
have their own way of teaching
while
some
students
may not be able to absorb it. So,
students
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range of understanding
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concepts through the
internet
.
Moreover
, the
internet
cannot identify the
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strenghts
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strengths
and weaknesses
in contrast
to the
teachers
who in order to help them gain their academic excellences. In summary, I believe that the
students
gain valuable
knowlegde
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knowledge
,details and understanding from the
teachers
than from the
internet
and television.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pedagogy
  • Motivation
  • Interactive learning
  • Curriculum-based
  • Passive consumption
  • Digital literacy
  • Critical thinking
  • Problem-solving
  • Feedback mechanism
  • Misinformation
  • Biases
  • Technological advancements
  • Educational methodologies
  • Guidance
  • Structured learning
  • Reliable sources
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