write a letterto local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.

Dear Sirs, I am writing
this
letter in order to ask you to pay more attention to the local exercise equipment in our vicinity. I have been living in the northern area of the town for almost 20 years. As you probably know, our neighbourhood is one of the most populated places in Tehran. Unfortunately, facilities and amenities here,
however
, have not been developed in proportion to the increasing number of inhabitants.
In addition
,
due to
the lack of sports facilities,
for example
, young adults like myself are forced to take long trips to the city centre if they want to do a simple exercise on a daily basis. It means more pressure will be imposed on the public transport system, let alone the over usage of the central recruitment clubs. Because of all the mentioned reasons, I strongly suggest you address
this
issue in person as soon as possible. I look forward to
this
problem being solved Yours faithfully, Arash Abbasi
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task response
Ensure that the letter directly addresses the task prompt, making a clear and specific request for additional sports facilities.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are adequate, but the greeting and closing could be more formal and appropriate for a letter to local authorities.

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