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Your landlord is asking to increase the rent write a letter to him In your you shoul tell: Why do you think the rent shouldn't be increased. What you will do if it is increased

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Dear Mr. David, I am writing
this
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 letter regarding to
increase
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the
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in the
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rent
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 of my
appartment
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apartment
. I would like to tell you
about
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that
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 my financial condition is not good
let
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to let
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 you know
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in a
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a days
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days
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beacuse
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because
i
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 did
payed
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paid
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 my college fee
in
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apply
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this
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 month. Let you know, that
i
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I
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 am a student of electrical engineering
in
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at
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 Punjab
university
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University
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apply
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also
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,
this
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 is my
last
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 semester. I couldn't pay that
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increase
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increased
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rent
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.
As well as
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i
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I
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 have sent some money
of
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to
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 my family because
i
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I
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 belong to
the
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a
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middle class
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middle-class
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 family and
i
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I
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 am the elder one.
Besides
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 that,
i
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I
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 have many responsibilities
of
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for
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 my family please understand my situation.
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Nowadays
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i
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I
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 am not able to pay the
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increase
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increased
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rent
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. If you
increase
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 the
rent
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i
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I
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 will leave your house after one month.
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, if you want
i
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I
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 should
be stay
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stay
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 here so give me a chance
i
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I
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 will
increase
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 the
rent
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 as soon as possible. Please be considerate. Your's sincerely, Ahmed

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Organize your ideas logically and cohesively. Use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter. Address the issue of rent increase more directly and propose a more feasible solution. Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout the letter.
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