Your landlord is asking to increase the rent write a letter to him In your you shoul tell: Why do you think the rent shouldn't be increased. What you will do if it is increased

Dear Mr. David, I am writing
this
letter regarding to
increase
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rent
of my
appartment
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apartment
. I would like to tell you
about
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my financial condition is not good
let
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you know
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in a
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a days
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beacuse
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because
i
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did
payed
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paid
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my college fee
in
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apply
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this
month. Let you know, that
i
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am a student of electrical engineering
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Punjab
university
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also
,
this
is my
last
semester. I couldn't pay that
increase
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rent
.
As well as
i
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have sent some money
of
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to
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my family because
i
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belong to
the
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middle class
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family and
i
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am the elder one.
Besides
that,
i
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have many responsibilities
of
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for
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my family please understand my situation.
Now a days
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i
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am not able to pay the
increase
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increased
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rent
. If you
increase
the
rent
i
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will leave your house after one month.
Moreover
, if you want
i
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should
be stay
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here so give me a chance
i
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will
increase
the
rent
as soon as possible. Please be considerate. Your's sincerely, Ahmed
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Organize your ideas logically and cohesively. Use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter. Address the issue of rent increase more directly and propose a more feasible solution. Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout the letter.
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