Your landlord is asking to increase the rent write a letter to him In your you shoul tell: Why do you think the rent shouldn't be increased. What you will do if it is increased
Dear Mr. David,
I am writing
this
letter regarding to increase
the
Change preposition
in the
rent
of my appartment
. I would like to tell you Correct your spelling
apartment
about
my financial condition is not good Change preposition
that
let
you knowAdd the particle
to let
Change preposition
in a
a days
Correct the article-noun agreement
days
a day
beacuse
Correct your spelling
because
i
did Change the capitalization
I
payed
my college fee Correct your spelling
paid
in
Change preposition
apply
this
month.
Let you know, that i
am a student of electrical engineering Change the capitalization
I
in
Punjab Change preposition
at
university
Capitalize word
University
Rephrase
apply
also
, this
is my last
semester. I couldn't pay that increase
Replace the word
increased
rent
. As well as
i
have sent some money Change the capitalization
I
of
my family because Change preposition
to
i
belong to Change the capitalization
I
the
Correct article usage
a
middle class
family and Add a hyphen
middle-class
i
am the elder one. Change the capitalization
I
Besides
that, i
have many responsibilities Change the capitalization
I
of
my family please understand my situation. Change preposition
for
Now a days
Correct the word
Nowadays
i
am not able to pay the Change the capitalization
I
increase
Change the verb form
increased
rent
.
If you increase
the rent
i
will leave your house after one month. Change the capitalization
I
Moreover
, if you want i
should Change the capitalization
I
be stay
here so give me a chance Change the verb form
stay
i
will Change the capitalization
I
increase
the rent
as soon as possible.
Please be considerate.
Your's sincerely,
AhmedSubmitted by gullsiddiq212 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Organize your ideas logically and cohesively. Use appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter. Address the issue of rent increase more directly and propose a more feasible solution. Maintain a suitable writing tone throughout the letter.