The graph gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007

The graph gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007
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The provided graph illustrates the households'
car
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usage in Great Britain during the period from 1971 to 2007.
Overall
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, the percentage of no
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car
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cars
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plummeted drastically,
while
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the amount of two
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grew throughout the period.
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, the percentage of one
car
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and three or more
cars
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remained constant.
Firstly
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, in 1971, just below 50% of Great Britains did not have a
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but it declined to 25% in 2007. The percentage of holding two
cars
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was nearly 9% in 1971, which went up to around 25% in 2007 and the percentages of no
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and two
cars
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met in the year 2003, which was around 25%.
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, one
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and three or more
cars
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had similar patterns between 1971 and 2007. They kept just around 45% of one
car
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at the beginning of the period and it continued to 2007 with tiny fluctuations.
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, a small amount of them had three or more
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, which was around 1%
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the start year and that category jumped slowly to nearly 8% in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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