The graph gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007

The graph gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007
The provided graph illustrates the households'
car
usage in Great Britain during the period from 1971 to 2007.
Overall
, the percentage of no
car
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cars
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plummeted drastically,
while
the amount of two
cars
grew throughout the period.
However
, the percentage of one
car
and three or more
cars
remained constant.
Firstly
, in 1971, just below 50% of Great Britains did not have a
car
but it declined to 25% in 2007. The percentage of holding two
cars
was nearly 9% in 1971, which went up to around 25% in 2007 and the percentages of no
cars
and two
cars
met in the year 2003, which was around 25%.
Secondly
, one
car
and three or more
cars
had similar patterns between 1971 and 2007. They kept just around 45% of one
car
at the beginning of the period and it continued to 2007 with tiny fluctuations.
Furthermore
, a small amount of them had three or more
cars
, which was around 1%
in
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the start year and that category jumped slowly to nearly 8% in 2007.
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