The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
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graph
compares how many 65 people and over live in the
USA
, Japan and Sweden over a century.
It is clear that
the total proportion of
population
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the population
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ager
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aged
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65 and over
increas
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increase
increased
among all these three countries but the most major change in
this
percentage belongs to
Japanies
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Japan
. In 1940, only about 9 and 7 per
cent
of
population
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the population
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in the
USA
and Sweden were 65 and over,
while
this
number for Japan was 5 per
cent
of the
population
. Over the next 50 years, the figures for both the
USA
and Sweden rose reaching just under 15%,
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compared
to a steady fall in Japanies who are 65 and above. During the
last
50 years, the
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figure
future
for
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Sweden
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has seen
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several up and down and it is predicted to reach its peak in 2040 with a
population
of just over 25 per
cent
of people aged 65 and over,
while
the
USA
will see a rise of around 3 per
cent
. Japan
also
will experience the most dramatic increase rise from 10 in 2030 to nearly 27 in 2040.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aging population
  • proportion
  • elderly
  • significant increase
  • surpass
  • gradual increase
  • crucial period
  • rapid increase
  • healthcare advancements
  • lower birth rates
  • projections
  • adjustments in social services
  • demographic dynamics
  • lifestyle choices
  • trends
  • notable
  • potentially
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