The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1930 and 2010.
Both maps display the village of Stockeford in two different years. There is a post office which is located west of the main line and river stoke which ends with a bridge. Over the period, dramatic changes took place near the main lane. In 1930, there were two shops and farmland west of the main
road
, which
is
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knocked down after 80 years. There is a
road
which is surrounded by many little houses in 2010.
On the other hand
, the most noticeable changes and additions observed east of the main
road
over the past 80 years. Farmlands, which were placed west south and north-east of the trail, have been demolished. The primary school, which was located east of the
road
, has been extended in 2010. Gardens and a large house, which were surrounded by a fence, were specific replacements in 2010.
Although
the gardens are removed, the large house is expanded and renamed as a retirement home.
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