The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps below show the village of Stockeford in 1930 and 2010.
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Both maps display the village of Stockeford in two different years. There is a post office which is located west of the main line and river stoke which ends with a bridge. Over the period, dramatic changes took place near the main lane. In 1930, there were two shops and farmland west of the main
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knocked down after 80 years. There is a
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which is surrounded by many little houses in 2010.
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, the most noticeable changes and additions observed east of the main
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over the past 80 years. Farmlands, which were placed west south and north-east of the trail, have been demolished. The primary school, which was located east of the
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, has been extended in 2010. Gardens and a large house, which were surrounded by a fence, were specific replacements in 2010.
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the gardens are removed, the large house is expanded and renamed as a retirement home.
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