This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
The line graph demonstrates the recycling habits of paper and cardboard, plastics recycling rate remained
glass
containers
, aluminium cans, and plastics in a particular country during
1982 to 2010. The data is measured in Change preposition
from
percentage
.
It is crystal clear that , in 1982 the recycling rate of paper and cardboard was around 65 Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
percent
.which
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which
was
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increase
to 70 Wrong verb form
increased
percent
in 1986 but again drop
down by nearly five Wrong verb form
dropped
percent
in the next year
. Whereas
, after 1990 it was drastically incline
to and reached Change the verb form
was drastically inclined
to
80 Change preposition
apply
percent
in 1994. But from 1994, it started Change the spelling
per cent
decline
and reached again on 70 Fix the infinitive
to decline
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
given year
. While
, in the initial year
the
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apply
glass
containers
recycling was quite popular fifty Fix the agreement mistake
container
percent
glass
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of glass
containers
recycled
in that Add a missing verb
were recycled
year
as
in the following two years it declined to 40 Change preposition
apply
percent
. While
,
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apply
in
1990 the recycling rate of Change preposition
apply
glass
containers
started increasing steadily and reach
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reached
by
twenty Change preposition
apply
percent
in 2010.
Moving Change the spelling
per cent
further
, in 1986 aluminium cans started recycling with nearly five percent
which was slightly expanded during the whole Change the spelling
per cent
year
and in
the end Change preposition
at
year
the proportion goes to 45 Add a comma
year,
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, in 1990 a new material introduced
in the list of recycling namely plastics . It started recycling around five Add a missing verb
was introduced
percent
and steadily Change the spelling
per cent
increase
during the period but remained below twenty Wrong verb form
increased
percent
.
To recap it is concluded that, during the whole period proportion of Change the spelling
per cent
recycling
paper and Replace the word
recycled
cardboards
always remained highest Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
that
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than
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However
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the
least
from 1990 to 2010.Correct word choice
lowest
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