You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to you in order to

filing

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a complaint about the meals that

was

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distributed

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last

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air journey. I

have

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departed my travel from Peel Regin

international airport

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Canada to Delhi

international airport

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India on 20 October 2023. The flight number was AR023.

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there was no trouble with the timing and arrangements except with

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food

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the food

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that was provided during the journey. I am a

vegeterian

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vegetarian

and I

had

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charged

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for vegeterian

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vegeterian

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vegetarian

food

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while

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booked

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my ticket. They

were actually faced

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shortage

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of non-meat

eatble

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eatable

items. I only got

good

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breakfast

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18 hour flight and

unable

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to consume anything apart from water or coffee. I would request you to deal with airline

food

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supply workers. They should check the proper quantity of

food

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that is

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going to

takeoff

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with the passengers.

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airline

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should

prepair

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prepare

for alternate

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if they face any inconvenience in the future

such

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instant landing for

near by

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spot

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for

food

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and services. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Wed Oct 25 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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