The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of total spending on miscellaneous goods in the USA in 1966.
Overall
, while
the category of food and cars demonstrated huge percentages among other items, the expense of food only exhibited an insignificant amount.
The main important spending areas were foods
and automobiles with almost three-fourths of the outcome in 1966. The former was exactly 44% of all expenses; Fix the agreement mistake
food
however
, the latter was roughly one-fourth of the total expenditure. Therefore
, the ratio of foods nearly doubled its the
closest counterpart in the US in 1966.
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Conversely
, the vast majority of items were only contributed to a few amounts for the whole expenditure.
The proportion of furniture expense
was 10% which was slightly higher than petrol's (%9). There was an Fix the agreement mistake
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correlation between restaurants and books, with 7% and 6%, respectively. Correct your spelling
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Finally
, the proportion of money spent on computers was only 1% in the US in 1966.Submitted by historicalpen on
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