The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.

The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.
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The given diagrams illustrate the changes in Bridgetown in the 30-year period (1700-2000). From an
overall
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perspective, eye-catching and modern alternatives have been shown in Bridgetown after 30 years. As observed in the details, in 1700,
while
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marker
places
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were located in the northwest corner, a castle was in the northeast corner of
this
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city. The river was crossed in front of two buildings, and a bridge was placed on the river. In 2000 year, we could show remarkable changes in
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map. A school was made in the northwest corner
instead
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of the castle.
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, a rail of the train was created in the middle of marker
places
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. Indeed, in the new map, these
places
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were destroyed and transfer
places
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were made
instead
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of it. As shown, the bridge was transformed into a double bridge.
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, In the old map, there was a farmer in the cross the river which changed to a non-agricultural ground in
Bridgetown
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the Bridgetown
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city in the new diagram.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words places with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • land use
  • expansion
  • transformation
  • modernization
  • industrial
  • recreational facilities
  • housing development
  • transportation networks
  • demolished
  • constructed
  • preserved
  • evolution
  • adaptation
  • architectural styles
  • cityscape
  • historical preservation
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