The diagrams below show the changes of a town called Bridgetown 1700 and 2000. Compare and summarize the changes of the Bridgetown.
The given diagrams illustrate the changes in Bridgetown in the 30-year period (1700-2000). From an
overall
perspective, eye-catching and modern alternatives have been shown in Bridgetown after 30 years.
As observed in the details, in 1700, Linking Words
while
marker Linking Words
places
were located in the northwest corner, a castle was in the northeast corner of Use synonyms
this
city. The river was crossed in front of two buildings, and a bridge was placed on the river.
In 2000 year, we could show remarkable changes in Linking Words
this
map. A school was made in the northwest corner Linking Words
instead
of the castle. Linking Words
Also
, a rail of the train was created in the middle of marker Linking Words
places
. Indeed, in the new map, these Use synonyms
places
were destroyed and transfer Use synonyms
places
were made Use synonyms
instead
of it. As shown, the bridge was transformed into a double bridge.
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Moreover
, In the old map, there was a farmer in the cross the river which changed to a non-agricultural ground in Linking Words
Bridgetown
city in the new diagram.Add an article
the Bridgetown
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words places with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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