It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media _rich society.

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Over the decades our society has undergone a major transition in terms of social
media
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hard to imagine
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life without it.
However
, It has both positive and negative impacts which cannot be denied and I will discuss my both views in
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conclusion. To commence with, social
media
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inevitable role in
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life .
Firstly
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as a time saver because as we compared to
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technology in the past we
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source for communication but these days we can connect with anyone in an instant across the world.
Secondly
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these days
, it proves very productive in many sectors
such
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, Defence and Educational as well.
Along with
it, it
also
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assists
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softwares
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software
for solving any mystery or crime case.
On the other hand
, there are ample negative impacts on the community which cannot be neglected. To
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with, in
this
modern era majority of the masses
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modern gadgets and
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are one of them. Now these days most
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the
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people
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time on social
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ruining their prime time which has adverse
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consequences
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Moreover
, there is
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of
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information by accessing
such
online platforms because few
people
mislead
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people
online or might be for blackmailing as well.
To conclude
, social
media
is indispensable in terms of living
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and
its
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very hard to survive with these
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of
technoliges
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technologies
technology
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part of our daily routine. But It has
also
dark side which has terrible impacts on folks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • media-rich society
  • information overload
  • public opinion
  • social connectivity
  • geographical distances
  • shape public opinion
  • information access
  • privacy concerns
  • digital platforms
  • information dependency
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