The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The below diagram illustrates the process of
water
recycling and how
water
is evaporated from two different regions. One has a lot of trees and plants and the other is fully developed and constructions of buildings everywhere.
Overall
, both have similar steps consisting of six different stages.
However
, one shows an increased rate of
evaporation
while
the other shows a decreasing trend.
To begin
with, the forested side consists of a number of herbs and shrubs and the amount of rainfall is the same as that of urban areas. Rainfall is the initial step the drops of
water
fall onto the earth's surface and penetrate deep into the soil where the infiltration process occurs, after that,
this
water
moves to the base flow and removes the pollution.
then
from here, the
water
starts to do transportation and start moving in the upward direction in the form of
evaporation
.
This
goes up into the sky and forms the could and
hence
again rail fall occurs.
On the other hand
, urban areas are covered with more buildings
hence
the rate of
evaporation
is not the same they did not absorb more
water
because of the constructed area.
Hence
leads to less transportation and
evaporation
along with
that the erosion is raised just because the impurities are still there in the
water
.
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