The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The below diagram illustrates the process of
water
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recycling and how
water
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is evaporated from two different regions. One has a lot of trees and plants and the other is fully developed and constructions of buildings everywhere.
Overall
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, both have similar steps consisting of six different stages.
However
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, one shows an increased rate of
evaporation
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while
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the other shows a decreasing trend.
To begin
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with, the forested side consists of a number of herbs and shrubs and the amount of rainfall is the same as that of urban areas. Rainfall is the initial step the drops of
water
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fall onto the earth's surface and penetrate deep into the soil where the infiltration process occurs, after that,
this
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water
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moves to the base flow and removes the pollution.
then
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from here, the
water
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starts to do transportation and start moving in the upward direction in the form of
evaporation
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.
This
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goes up into the sky and forms the could and
hence
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again rail fall occurs.
On the other hand
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, urban areas are covered with more buildings
hence
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the rate of
evaporation
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is not the same they did not absorb more
water
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because of the constructed area.
Hence
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leads to less transportation and
evaporation
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along with
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that the erosion is raised just because the impurities are still there in the
water
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "hence".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, evaporation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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