The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
The pie charts display the proportion of money spent on Food,Cars,Petrol,Restaurants,Furniture,Computer and Books in 1966.
Overall
, it is evident from the diagram that a major percentage was spent on Food, while
the least amount was spent on buying books.
To begin
with, In 1996, Slightly more than two fifths
of the total was spent on purchasing Food hitting the peak of the chart, Add a hyphen
two-fifths
while
a small amount was on computers, hitting the bottom of the diagram at 1%.However
,a significant proportion was alloted
to Correct your spelling
allocated
allowed
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the car
a car
car
as well at 23%, making it the second most purchased item.
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cars
Furthermore
, in the same year, the figure
for books and restaurants were almost equivalent at 6% and 7% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
figures
Also
, furniture and petrol had a similar pattern as it
made up a minority at 10% and 9% each and they were the least Correct pronoun usage
they
stuffs
that Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
were
bought in the USA.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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