The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line graph illustrates the amount consumed
on
margarine, Change preposition
of
butter
as well as
lowfat
and reduced spreads between 1981 and 2007. Correct your spelling
low-fat
low fat
Overall
, all spreads had declined towards the end of the period
. There was only butter
and margarine in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
and lowfat
and reduced spreads joined the consumer list in the middle of the Correct your spelling
low-fat
low fat
period
.
In
the beginning of 1981, Change the preposition
At
butter
was the highest. It reached its peak of 159 grams
then
dropped consistently. By the year 1991, margarine replaced Correct word choice
and then
butter
and had 100 grams
consumption
that remained stable until 1996. In the same year, it started droppingChange preposition
of consumption
,
but was still the most consumed spread towards the end of the Remove the comma
apply
period
.
On the other hand
, low fat
and reduced spreads that started later had a different trend. It climbed from 10 Add a hyphen
low-fat
grams
in 1996 to 81 grams
in 2001 which was the highest growth among all other spreads. Despite the rapid growth, it also
dipped in 2007 and had the least consumption.Submitted by ronica.adriano on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words butter, period, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
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