The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
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The given chart illustrates how three different types of fast food were consumed per week in Britain from 1970 to 1990.
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, there was a considerable increase in hamburger, fish and chips consumption throughout the period,
while
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a decline was seen in pizza.
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, the figure for the weekly ingestion of fish and chips consistently grew to surpass that of pizza, making it the most used category of fast food from 1985 onwards. Approximately
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100 grams
of fish and chips were ingested every week in Britain in 1970, followed by dramatic growth and reached a peak at 500
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in 1990.
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, the amount of hamburgers eaten by the UK people climbed from just under 50
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in 1970 to around 100
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in 1980, after which it saw a moderate change over the next 5 years before touching about 300
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in 1990.
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, the figure for pizza used per week in Britain started at precisely 300
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in 1970, after which it witnessed a progressively tumble to 200
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in 1985.
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the number rose to just over 210
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at the end
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of the period, it was still the lowest one when compared with other kinds.
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