The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from on university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five yeas.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from on university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five yeas.
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The pie chart illustrates what anthropology graduate students of a university do after finishing their education.
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, the table compares their earnings after 5 years of
work
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.
Overall
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, most of the
graduates
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work
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full-time and a small percentage of them
work
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part-time
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studying postgraduate.
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, most of the
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have the highest level of salary,
while
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the least of them have the lowest amount of salary.
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the pie chart, more than half (52%) of the graduate population have full-time jobs.
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, 5% of them both
work
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and continue their education.
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, people who
work
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part-time, are unemployed, and study postgraduate as
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full-time students account for 15%, 12%, and 8% respectively. The remaining 8% is allocated to a variety of other items, which are unknown. As the table shows, four-fifths of freelance and government workers receive more than 75,000 dollars after five years of
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,
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only 75% of the
graduates
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who
work
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for private companies are paid that amount. A little less than 40% (35%) of the anthropology
graduates
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who
work
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for private companies earn more than between 50,000 and 75,000 dollars and only 10% of them receive less than 50,000 dollars.
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, 15% and 5% of both freelancer and public organisation workers are paid less than 75,000 and 50,000 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Vocabulary: Replace the words work, graduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree course
  • chart
  • table
  • findings
  • conclusions
  • salary data
  • comparisons
  • summarize
  • opinion
  • suggestions
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