The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
The given maps illustrate the transformation of a museum and its surroundings in 1990 compared to 2016. These maps witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the replacement of the cottage for a coffee
shop
and the disappearance of
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the exhibiton
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exhibiton
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exhibit
in the museum's surroundings. Look at the building on the west left side, in 1990, it had a small
shop
near the entrance. But in 2016, the
shop
was enlarged through the next room, it has more two times as big as the old one. Opposite the building, it was a
carpark
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car park
. In 1990, it was left next to big gardens.
However
, in 2016 the garden was discarded for parking space because of the increase in the number of vehicles. In the corner of the left side of an old map, it is easy to see a square block named cottage. After 26 years, it was replaced by
the
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a
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coffee
shop
for catering to visitors. The surroundings of the museum were not changed that much. They still had a small garden between 2 trees and
main
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the main
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road stayed the same position. The most remarkable change was the demolition of an exhibition for citizen's entertainment.
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