You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given diagram delineates the information regarding the method that can prevent the areas, which are at higher risk of flood, by using stopbanks.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that stopbank
helps to prevent the Correct article usage
a stopbank
area
which is near the river or dam to get
drained in the flood.
Change preposition
from getting
Stopbank
consist of freeboard, berm and floodgate. If the area
have
Change the verb form
has
the
Correct article usage
a
stopbank
as a barrier between the river and an accomdation
site near it, Correct your spelling
accommodation
this
prevent
the water Change the verb form
prevents
to enter
Change preposition
from entering
in
the housing sites. If the Change preposition
apply
level
of 100-year flood level
is quite high, however
, due to
the presence of this
technology, the water in housing colonies is quite low, which will prevent from
flooding.
Change preposition
apply
In contrast
, if stopbank
is not present, the Correct article usage
a stopbank
level
of water on the riverside is identical to the side of land
Correct article usage
the land
area
. Therefore
the houses needs to be more raised as compared to the house of
the Change preposition
in
area
that have stopbanks. The gap between freeboard
and Correct article usage
the freeboard
floor
Correct article usage
the floor
level
of house
is only 30 mm.Add an article
the house
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stopbank, area, level with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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