Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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perspective

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of some people,

university

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education

can solely widen job opportunities for graduates. Others,

however

, hold the view that

university

education

brings about plenty of

benefits

for

students

. In my book, I am in

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of the latter opinion

due to

several reasons

such

as in-depth and professional horizons or wide social circle in terms of career. On the one hand, it is undisputable that the curriculums of

university

are really academic,

intellectual

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and request from undergraduates a wide range of distinct

knowledge

.

As a result

, a large number of

students

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out of school or cover a lot of ground to learn from scratch. In doing so

students

can work straight to earn a living and have a piggy bank for the rainy day.

During undergraduates

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are struggling with harsh curriculums with

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the sole

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aim is

have

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a degree to work in a big firm, all

students

, who choose

having

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a gap year and

finding

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a durable job, possess four to five years of experience. The advantages of

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a bachelor

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bachelor

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degree cannot outweigh the

benefits

of real-life experience and vital skills from working sooner.

On the other hand

,

although

aforementioned

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disadvantageous aspects of

university

education

and

benefits

of working early, the concept of specialized

knowledge

construct a strong base for all undergraduates to prepare for higher

education

or even job position. Higher

education

can broaden

in-depth

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horizon of your profession.

Furthermore

, a qualification cannot only enhance your employment prospects with optimal incomes but

also

is

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the evidence of your in-depth major.

In addition

, whilst studying in

university

, you may have

a

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plenty of chances to interact with many

out-standing

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peers, who have the same major and have enough or

further

knowledge

to discuss

about

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your obstruction or even promote your ability. In doing so, the expansion of your social circle in your specialized yield is inevitable. In conclusion,

although

working straight seems to vary your experiences and vital skills, the

benefits

of

university

education

outweigh its difficulties in terms of in-depth

knowledge

, professional social circle even prospects of future career.