You have just spend a weekend staying at The Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager. Explain in the letter: When did you visit the hotel. the details of your room and the bag * how can one identify the bag

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing a request from you that find my

bag

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in your hotel room. Since I did a lot of shopping with my family we felt hungry and we decided to eat dinner in the motel on the 21st of October, 2023. When we were eating tasty food suddenly the curry was put on my clothes by mistake.

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this

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, the napkin was not there on the table so I rushed to the washroom with the red purse. After that, I came back to the table and finished our food.

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, the next day morning I checked out room of 201. When I went to my home I realised my red

bag

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was missing in the bathroom area. The specification of my

bag

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is there are two steel straps on the edge.

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, the design was a Teddy bear on the front side. Another thing was that there is five pair of keys in my car so I am requesting you to please find my

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as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully,

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coherence cohesion

Provide more specific details about the bag, such as its brand, size, and any distinct features.

coherence cohesion

Group related ideas in separate paragraphs to improve the organization of the letter.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the quality of your writing.

grammatical range

Pay attention to the correct use of sentence structures and grammar.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

185 words

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