In some
places
, professional
jobsChange the noun form
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opportunities for
doctorFix the agreement mistake
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and engineers
are believeChange the verb form
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to just
work
in
theirChange the word
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countries
that they have been
trainingReplace the word
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,
however
, others think that
workingReplace the word
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opportunities should be
openWrong verb form
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up wider and are able to let them
work
in
other countryChange the wording
another country
other countries
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if they want to. In my opinion, I believe that they should be free to
work
at the
places
they wish for.
Working in the
places
people
have been training, might
result
asChange preposition
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higher efficiency
while
working. For
instantReplace the word
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, working as doctors in a hospital
thatCorrect word choice
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individuals
have been spending their time being
internFix the agreement mistake
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may give better
resultFix the agreement mistake
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while
working, as they may feel less pressure and anxiety
due to
how
useWrong verb form
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to the environment they are around
while
training.
Moreover
, working in some
countries
or in the same
places
they have been trained,
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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like payback to
itsCorrect pronoun usage
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own
countries
.
Furthermore
, less population of
peoplesFix the agreement mistake
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are interested in being doctors and
engineerFix the agreement mistake
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,
due to
itsChange the word
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difficulty
whileChange preposition
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learning and
longCorrect article usage
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period of learning time.
As a
result
, in many
those kinds of
working Verb problem
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jobs lack
people
doing
itCorrect pronoun usage
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.
In contrast
, giving
people
chances to explore and
work
in different
countries
and
places
helpCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them develop their skills and
giveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them
widerAdd an article
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view of
workingCorrect article usage
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aspect.
Additionally
,
individuals
get to meet new kinds of
people
and learn new things that they are not able to learn in their own
countries
and in the end, they can bring back those new educational and improve their
countries
.
Furthermore
, nowadays many
countries
pay higher wages
thenReplace the word
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itsCorrect pronoun usage
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own
countries
due to
how growing it is.
For example
, America pays much higher wages being an engineer than those working in Thailand, since,
people
in America
paysChange the verb form
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higher taxes.
DespiteCorrect pronoun usage
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, some
individuals
may prefer to
work
there and get paid better
and Correct word choice
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while
enjoying new experiences.
To sum up
, working in the place
people
have been training may
result
betterChange preposition
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as they have
lessChange the quantifier
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worries
due to
the used to
of Change preposition
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the environment they are
, Change preposition
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moreover
, it
also
helps pay back its
countries
and help with the lack of jobs.
On the other hand
, working in different
places
give
individuals
widerCorrect article usage
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view of
workingCorrect article usage
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aspect,
some
countries
offer better wages and working lives.
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