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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting the total energy from 1971 to 2006

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The given line graph depicts the
percentage
use
 of renewable
energy
 of the total
energy
 in six countries from 1971 to 2006. A cursory glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that Finland was the leader in the
use
 of alternative
resources
 of
energy
,
where as
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 the United Kingdom used these
resources
 the least throughout the given period of 35 years. Finland used almost a quarter of renewable
energy
 in 1971.
This
percentage
 fell to just over 15% by the late 1980s
,
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 but picked up again and reached its starting level by 2006 despite some fluctuations throughout. Denmark ranked
second,
among the given six countries, in the
use
 of renewable sources. The usage of
such
resources
 in
this
 country fluctuated between 10% and 15%. 8% of renewable
resources
 made up for the total
energy
 used in France in 1971. Despite some fluctuations throughout, the
percentage
 grew slightly and reached about 11% by 2006. Germany started at 5%
use
 of renewable
energy
 in 1976.
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 growth was seen and the
percentage
 became 10% approximately by 2006. In the UK, the
use
 of renewable
energy
 escalated from 1% in 1971 to
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 5% by 2006.
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