Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Proper waste management of the
residentials
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residents
are
rarely seen, normally. Sometimes the Change the verb form
is
people
living in a residential area may be concerned but the overall
scenario is telling us something else.
A large number of people
are not aware about
the right disposal system Change the preposition
of
of
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for
wastes
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waste
of
their homes. Actually, the lack of depth knowledge about the negative effects of these things Change preposition
in
are
leading the Change the verb form
is
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so. Wrong verb form
masses to do
Besides
, they have no idea where on
how to recycle Correct your spelling
or
those
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them
People
are habituated to throw
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throwing
wastes
here and there. "Fix the agreement mistake
waste
Wastes
can be recycled"- this
idea didn't get popularity in the society. Moreover
, It might be thought that the ways of recycling is
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are
problamatic
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problematic
that
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apply
keen
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keenness
of
recycling home Change preposition
on
wastes
is hardly seen. Sometimes, the government or the authority do not ask Fix the agreement mistake
waste
people
to do the right or help them to do the process in a
easy way.
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people
are not aware or
not interested as well to Change preposition
of or
recycle
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recycling
the
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apply
people
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implementation
be take
place to aware Change the verb form
take
people
and to make them understand about
the environmental and health issues of stopping the recycling process of the home Change preposition
apply
wastes
. In Addition
, If there is law
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the law
a law
this
but not implemented by Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
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government
then
only law
will not be Correct article usage
the law
adequete
but the aware Correct your spelling
adequate
people
have to raise their voice
to the Fix the agreement mistake
voices
authority
to change that on the disobedients.
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authorities
last
, I am inclined to say that laws are needed to make people
neuse their wastes
but I must confess that Fix the agreement mistake
waste
awaring
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awarding
people
should be done primarily. If the awarness
program is not adequate the the Correct your spelling
awareness
further
process should be done in legal ways and the authority should be super active in this
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