Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Proper waste management of the
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rarely seen, normally. Sometimes the
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the right disposal system
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their homes. Actually, the lack of depth knowledge about the negative effects of these things
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leading the
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, they have no idea where
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how to recycle
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here and there. "
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can be recycled"-
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idea didn't get popularity in the society.
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recycling home
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is hardly seen. Sometimes, the government or the authority do not ask
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to do the right or help them to do the process in
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easy way.
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not interested as well to
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waste. It is a must to form laws for binding
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and the proper
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is obviously needed. Before that, a phase can
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place to aware
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the environmental and health issues of stopping the recycling process of the home
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, If there is
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about
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but not implemented by
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government
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will not be
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adequate
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have to raise their
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to the
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to change that on the disobedients. At
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but I must confess that
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should be done primarily. If the
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process should be done in legal ways and the authority should be super active in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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