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Proportion of all students who spent fifteen hours a week or more in the library was very close to the postgraduates student who spent 1 to 7 hours in the library

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Proportion
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 of all
students
 who spent fifteen
hours
 a week or more in the
library
 was very close to the
postgraduates student
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postgraduate students
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 who spent 1 to 7
hours
 in the
library
. Meanwhile,
an undergraduate
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undergraduate students
an undergraduate student
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students
 showed
highest
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the highest
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 and lowest proportion who spent in the
library
.
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, a hafty of
undergraduate
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undergraduates
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 used the
library
 for eight to fourteen
hours
 per week. In three pie charts showed almost the same per
cent
 between 28-35 used the
library
 for 8 to 14
hours
 per week.
It is clear that
, those
students
 who are researching for
a
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an
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 undergraduate spent less
so
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apply
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time than either pie
charts
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chart
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.
Furthermore
, only fifteen per
cent
 of all
students
 spent between fifteen or more
hours
,
whereas
average
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the average
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 for all
students
 in
this
 category is
a
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two out of
twenty five
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twenty-five
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 per
cent
. The figures were 50 per
cent
 and 50 per
cent
 respectively.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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