The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main feature and making comparison where relevant.

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main feature and making comparison where relevant.
The
two
maps illustrate how the Stokeford city changes between 1930 and 2010. It can be seen clearly that the main point of the city was the transformation from rural to urban areas,
along with
the increased infrastructure and the disappearance of farmland. In the year 1930, the town was a farmland area with a large number of livestock located both in the southwest and the northeast. There were
two
shops and a post office in the west, with a primary school just on the east of the road,
also
an individual big house with gardens between in north and south of the area. During the next 80 years, the town saw a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that all of the farmland areas were transformed into a housing area, where the
two
shops were demolished and several houses were built
along with
two
connecting roads in the northwest and northeast.
Moreover
, the large house and the gardens were knocked down and several retirement houses were built in 2010.
In contrast
, only the bridge, the post office, and the river of Stoke remained in the exact same condition during the period of 80 years,
although
the primary school was added with
two
retirement houses in 2010.
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