The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the weekly expenditure on eight aspects in 1968 and in 2018. The sum comes in the percentage of weekly income.
Overall
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, the expenses
of
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for
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Food, Fuel and power, Clothing and
footware
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footwear
and Personal goods have dropped in the periods given. With the sharpest 15 per
cent
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decrease witnessed in Food. On top of that, money spent on other aspects
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as Housing, Transport and Leisure all increased
while
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Leisure was the one with the biggest growth (10 per
cent
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). In 1968, there used to be 35 per
cent
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of the weekly income spent on Food, which was the largest weekly expense of the family.
However
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, it merely accounted for 17 per
cent
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of the expense in 2018.
On the other hand
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, the largest expense in 2018 was on Leisure, with an obvious growth from 9 to 22 per
cent
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after 50 years.
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but not least, Household and goods was the category that accounted for the exact same proportion (8 per
cent
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) through the periods given.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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