As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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role in

development

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of

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, because each and every area

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attached

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technology. So some believe that

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students get more financial support from authorities as

compre

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students in other fields like literature, management, etc. If asked, I

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paragraphs. First and

fore most

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, it is truly acceptable that

science

play

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a critical role in the development of society. So

that

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, students should

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financial support who pursue scientific studies because study expense is higher in

this

field. So government support would be beneficial to move on

further

steps. But we

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ignore other areas of education fields because

there

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have equal contributions

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of

nation

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in

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from all parts.

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educated staff but other side management staff

also

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same contribution

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a goals

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balance

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approach in all the

area

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of education or employment as well

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same

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opportunity

to

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growth to all

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.

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, each

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their

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on

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their circle, whenever

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give

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equal opportunity

instead

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field.

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, scientists,

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and

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are

comming

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coming

from

science

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field as

contrast

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,

manager

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, CA

CEO

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, fashion

designer

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,

painter

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are coming

with

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different

area

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that

also

crucial role in making shape of world. In conclusion, it

acceptable

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by

every one

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that

science

is on top nowadays

however

people

could not

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underestimate the other fields because each subject

have

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their

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own value in shaping the nation. So

that

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, I believe that

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same

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opportunity to everyone

and

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maintain

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balance

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a balance

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between

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all over

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society.