The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.

The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
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The line graph compares levels of
unemployment
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among young people aged 16-24 with
overall
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unemployment
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figures over a
period
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of 20 years in England.
It is clear that
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the percentage of young
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who were unemployed at any time between 1993 and 2021 was considerably higher than the
overall
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proportion of jobless
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.
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,
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rates for both groups of
adults
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were consistently higher in London than in the rest of England. In 1993, the proportion of unemployed young
adults
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in London started at 22%, after which it experienced a decline to 14% in 1999, before ending the
period
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at 25% in 2012.
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, the
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rates
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rate
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of young
adults
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the rest of England was at 17% at the beginning of the
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, followed by a decrease of 6% to reach the lowest point
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11% in 2001, after which it started to rise steadily to end the
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at roughly 21%. The
unemployment
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rate of
adults
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living in London was 14% in 1993, with a subsequent dip to approximately 8% in 2001, after which it levelled off and began increasing to reach roughly 11% in the final year. Similar changes can be seen in the figures for unemployed English
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, which started the
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at 10%,
then
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reduced steadily to its lowest point at around 4% in 2004 before beginning to rise and
finally
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ended the
period
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at 8% in 2012.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words unemployment, period, adults with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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