The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
The line graph compares levels of
unemployment
among young people aged 16-24 with overall
unemployment
figures over a period
of 20 years in England.
It is clear that
the percentage of young adults
who were unemployed at any time between 1993 and 2021 was considerably higher than the overall
proportion of jobless adults
. Besides
, Unemployment
rates for both groups of adults
were consistently higher in London than in the rest of England.
In 1993, the proportion of unemployed young adults
in London started at 22%, after which it experienced a decline to 14% in 1999, before ending the period
at 25% in 2012. Similarly
, the unemployment
rates
of young Fix the agreement mistake
rate
adults
of
the rest of England was at 17% at the beginning of the Change preposition
in
period
, followed by a decrease of 6% to reach the lowest point at
11% in 2001, after which it started to rise steadily to end the Change preposition
of
period
at roughly 21%.
The unemployment
rate of adults
living in London was 14% in 1993, with a subsequent dip to approximately 8% in 2001, after which it levelled off and began increasing to reach roughly 11% in the final year. Similar changes can be seen in the figures for unemployed English adults
, which started the period
at 10%, then
reduced steadily to its lowest point at around 4% in 2004 before beginning to rise and finally
ended the period
at 8% in 2012.Submitted by ieltsamiedu on
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