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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People
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's opinions differ as to it is whether or not advantageous for countries to have citizens gaining a huge sum of revenue.
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 it is argued that governments should restrict extraordinary salaries, I personally believe that it is beneficial for both
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 and residents. There are various reasons why it is asserted that authorities should determine a definite amount of outcomes for a certain group of
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. The first and most obvious one is that the highly-paid sector of
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 may financially cause a distinguished level gap among
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.
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this
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 unequal state, some residents are more likely to remain indignant.
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, rich citizens with consistently high revenue have the possibility to buy factories and take the monopoly of a product and they
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 bring economic interruptions and unbalance in the supply and demand state. Despite the above arguments, I believe that
people
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 with high profits should not be
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society
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. In the first place, it would be preposterous to take
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's right to earn as much money as they have tried for.
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, it would be immoral to restrict
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 from their own outcomes and it
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 will arouse their objection.
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, there are already wealthy
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 throughout the world assisting others through charities or investing in businesses and
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entrepreneurship
 by which a large number of
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 can reach a salary. In conclusion,
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 some
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 think those earning high salaries might be a threat to
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 and that they should be restricted, I support the idea that they have always been beneficial to the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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