You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In the current world, most of the hospitals have very expensive medical treatments. It is believed that
,
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apply
such
services should be free of cost all over the world despite high-rated modern medical technology is not offered. This
essay will discuss why having such
free treatment is essential from the citizens
perspective.
The first reason would be Change noun form
citizen's
citizens'
increase
in its availability to less-income Add an article
an increase
family
. To give an example, most of Fix the agreement mistake
families
poor
class family not able to treat their small diseases because of high cost. Add an article
the poor
As a result
, such
diseases take a dangerous form and making
it almost impossible to Wrong verb form
make
cured
. Change the form of the verb
cure
Furthermore
, it is proven that majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
people
do not have their health insurance. Thus
, people
sometime
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sometimes
gets
bankrupt Change the verb form
get
while
paying the huge bill from the hospital.
In addition
to this
, such
approaches from government
will encourage its citizen to pay their taxes. Add an article
the government
For instance
, government
could use Add an article
the government
this
tax income to pay the medical system to provide such
no cost
services. Add a hyphen
no-cost
As a result
, healthy people
will be
more often contributing its Verb problem
contribute
government
and Correct article usage
the government
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the country
country
economy. Change noun form
country's
Moreover
, this
will bring equality in society where poor class family
will be treated as same as upper class Fix the agreement mistake
families
family
. Fix the agreement mistake
families
As a result
, gap
between poorer and richer will be reduced.
To summarise, providing free access to Add an article
the gap
health
system is Add an article
the health
step
in the right direction and very essential for the Add an article
a step
overall
growth of country
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the country
a country
,
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such
step
from the Fix the agreement mistake
steps
government
will ensure universal health system access to its people
and ensure social equality is maintained in the medical world.Submitted by destroyerblackhood2302 on
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grammatical range
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