Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for the government to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Waste
management has become a common issue around the world despite reinforcement in
waste
segregation
to recycle reusable items. People have come across the problem of recycling and they suggest that to increase the feasibility of recycling, the
government
must take a role in amending laws to curb the issue. It has become so careless that, people are not been aware of the destruction done to the environment, not just dumping those garbage but the carbon emission out of the activities involved in producing those new ones.
Instead
of focusing on new items, certain
waste
products including bottles, metals, and
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the extent it is possible to recycle
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.
For instance
, bottles after having inner content we tend to throw in the jungle or sometimes break without a second thought.
In addition
, the
waste
segregation
at the source say at home, no proper
waste
segregation
is maintained resulting in pressurizing limited human
resource
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resources
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at the
waste
segregation
centre, costing huge
amount
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to the
government
in doing so. That de-motivates both the
government
and the workers. When we encounter
such
difficulties in solving
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of
problem
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problems
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, no other ways than to inform the
government
to intervene. When they come to
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power there is no other way than to make rules and regulations imposing hefty fines on those who
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violate
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the rule.
For example
, maintenance of
waste
bins for separate wastes
such
as bottles, metals and dry
waste
, so that it will be easier for everyone who
are
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involved in recycling. In a nutshell, to save the planet and prolong the existence of living
organism
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organisms
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on
this
earth, it has become
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importance to minimize carbon
emission
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emissions
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thorough
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through
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a simple method of recycling out of many possible ways and means to do so.
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