All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I believe that
school
uniform is required to wear
Wrong verb form
be worn
while
in school
and in any school
program. Because it is important to maintain to
balance among Fix the infinitive
apply
students
.
There are few
reasons Correct article usage
a few
on
Change preposition
for
this
issues
, Fix the agreement mistake
issue
one
is if there is no specific dress
to wear in school
, then
the problem that will rise
among Correct your spelling
arise
students
is that one
can face negative remarks from their peers about wearing dress
. For Add an article
a dress
the dress
an
example, rich friends will wear dresses Correct article usage
apply
those
are too brandy, and expensive, Correct pronoun usage
that
where
other friends, those who are not able to buy brandy Correct word choice
whereas
dress
will get Fix the agreement mistake
dresses
bad
reaction from their friends. And, Add an article
a bad
this
kind of act will impact on
their mind. And Change preposition
apply
this
impact could lead to their family, which will cause more problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
For example
, if one
student does not has
any earning source, Change the verb form
have
thus
they are not able to buy dress
or any other things, Add an article
a dress
the dress
for
this
reason
they are totally Add a comma
reason,
depend
on their own family income, if Replace the word
dependent
one
's students
family does not have good
income, Add an article
a good
then
this
kind of demand to buy brandy dress
will pressure on their family fund, which can be a disastrous choice for them.
In terms of positive
side Add an article
the positive
a positive
to maintain
Change preposition
of maintaining
dress
codeCorrect article usage
the dress
is
, if Unnecessary verb
apply
dress
decorum is maintained from school
level, Correct article usage
the school
then
I believe when they will do Correct article usage
an offical
offical
job they will not face any problems Correct your spelling
official
to maintain
Change the verb form
maintaining
wearing
Correct article usage
the wearing
offcial
Correct your spelling
official
dress
. For example
, second day in
my first job, in Change preposition
of
rainy
season, I got wet by Add an article
the rainy
rain
, and later I changed it in Correct article usage
the rain
office
, but Correct article usage
the office
on the other hand
, on
of my Correct your spelling
one
college
could not do Replace the word
colleagues
this
, because he did not keep alternative
Correct article usage
an alternative
dress
.
In conclusion, school
dress
represents not only their identity but also
keeps botherhood
among Correct your spelling
brotherhood
motherhood
students
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