Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.

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a growing headache in the world and it is becoming a global catastrophe. There are some causes of the increasing
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to the trouble. One of the ideas could be
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export from the
countries
where
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situation is the best. It means if a country like Lithuania has big resources of
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they could export to other parts of
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where
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to solve
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decision. Talking about individuals. it is
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an opportunity to save, not waste
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which we can use for living. Usually, we do not think about saving white gold (so it is called in
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enough
water
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according to
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after 10 years it will be
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especially
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countries
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would like to state that there is no magic bullet and
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everything up we all should know that we live in one world and we should share our resources.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resource
  • growing worldwide demand
  • industrial growth
  • water-intensive crops
  • prolonged droughts
  • usable water
  • water conservation
  • water efficiency
  • infrastructure
  • fixing leaks
  • water-efficient appliances
  • water waste
  • renewable energy sources
  • water footprint
  • transboundary water basins
  • water-stressed regions
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