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Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher can't be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #courses #anyone #teacher #course
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courses
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 for being a
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 a group of people consider that
courses
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 can not make a good
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, l agree with those who feel that only
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 can make you a tutor. On the one hand, the
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 can make anyone a
teacher
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. There are many training places that tend to choose teaching as a career to achieve efficient knowledge. Lecturers teach how to give an
excelent
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excellent
 lesson to students and they give good tips for being a
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 as a lot of graduated students learn classroom management skills through education
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.
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, if teachers decide to learn useful knowledge, they should pass academic terms.
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, if you want to be a math
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, you must learn particular terms.
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, some people think that being a
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 does not only depend on completing the course. The
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 provide you
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 point but they don't train
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 to express your emotions or something that occur out of control, how must the
teacher
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 solve that issues.
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,
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 classroom is too noisy or the dormitories don't want to pay attention, you should dilute those problems. In my opinion,
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being a
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 is not simple and to going the only
courses
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 can not make you a tutor, you should have determination and endurance.
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 the course is a way to help to be a
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,
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to be an excellent tutor requires more things than to accomplish a course.
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, I believe that anyone can be a
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 but not excellent.
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Your opinion

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