The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The pie charts compare the proportion of kinds of nutritions of medium baked
potato
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and
macaroni
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as two dinners. From an
overall
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perspective, in the baked
potato
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and
macaroni
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charts, the biggest slice of the pie chart is taken by
carbohydrate
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carbohydrates
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. Now getting back to the details,
while
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the
potato
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lunch has 35% of
carbohydrate
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carbohydrates
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, it is 52% in the
macaroni
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lunch.
As a result
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,
this
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nutrition is higher amount in the second lunch.
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, the amount of protein is 25% in the first
dish
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, but it is 11 percentage in the second
dish
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. So, protein is higher in the
potato
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meal compared to the
macaroni
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meal. It can be seen that glucose is 15% in the
potato
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dish
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.
On the contrary
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, it is 11 proportion of
macaroni
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dish
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.
In addition
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, saturated fat is less in the first plate (10%) than the the second plate (21%). The opposite proportions are shown in the case of other nutritions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni, dish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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