The diagrams below show the present college and its plan in 2025 as proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the present college and its plan in 2025 as proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate a college in its current form and its proposed expansion.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the plan is to extend the college’s building and its car park into the nearby green space, which allows for more classrooms at the expense of an
entrance
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and a walking path. Currently, the college consists of only 3 classrooms, a reception, toilets, a library and a car park with a walking path along the left side. To the north of the building, there is a garden that backs onto the
entrance
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while
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to the south, there is a bus stop on the sidewalk facing the road.
In addition
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, the west side of the building is where the car park is situated with the sidewalk.
According to
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the proposal, only the lunch area and the parking lot will remain from the original site. The most significant development will be the extension of the building to the north, where it will overtake land previously occupied by the garden.
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, The
entrance
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and the footpath will be demolished to make way for the extra parking slots
as well as
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additional classrooms. Inside the building itself, the
entrance
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will be moved to the south of the building which is currently being occupied by the toilets.
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