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Due to the advances in science, it is now possible for people to live 100 old or even longer. While some people think it is a good thing, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#advances #science #people
It is indeed true that day by day modern
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science
 play a vital role
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medical
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 sector.It is possible to Individual for longer age to live but others believe it is
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a disadvantage
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 for the
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. In my opinion
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65 to 75
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 and elaborate my opinion. It is admittedly true that every
people
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want
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 to live longer and they want never die but the true fact everyone will be die which is natural for every human. Some
individual
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 believe that if a human
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100
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year
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that
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 that
people
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such
 as a scientist,
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university
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they
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are playing
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Albert
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to live
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 longer
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for
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 us. On the other side, Some individual
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 that older
people
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 of society because they think
noone
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no one
 company recruit old
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citizens
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,
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60 to 70
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 later their life is difficult
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servived
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survive
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Japanese
people
. They live 80 to 100
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doing
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socide
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suicide
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after 80 or 90
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depreciation
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people
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 time but end of their age most of
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the individual
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individual
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 are in
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depression
.In my
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 if a human
live
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 too longer in the
world
at the end
 of
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live
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 they spend more hard time which
is make
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depration
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depreciation
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