Air travel is preferred by the rich people only.Majority of the peope receive no benefit from the development of air travel as an industry. Do you agree or disagree?

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advent

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of technology, the

travel

time to any place around the globe has been minimised by

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means of air

travel

. It is often regarded for the wealthy individuals only, leaving behind a huge chunk of

population

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unable to benefit themselves by the means of

this

commodity. I completely disagree with the

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notion. Expenditure required to swiftly

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the intricate air network ,

as well as

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the skeptical

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skeptical

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nature of most populace in terms of spending

money

will prove

this

.

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with,

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modern technology has boosted growth in every sector, particularly the

travel

sector. It is now faster than ever and all eyes are concentrated on the

flight

industry.Since millions of dollars are needed to erect a single aeroplane

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and even more capital is needed in maintaining it

as well as

the personnel linked to it like highly salaried pilots, a hefty amount of

flight

attendants,

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a large operating ground unit. All because of

this

a decent sum of

money

is needed for travelling in an air carrier. To target the majority of the population, new cheaper

flight

companies have emerged providing a downgraded version of a business plane with

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quality of services.

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, after

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of

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organisation like Indigo in India, whose main motto is to provide the cheapest tickets

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around 10 million Indians

travel

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through

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their airplanes in the first launch year.

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, most

of

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citizens are always looking for an

oppurtunity

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opportunity

to narrow down their

travel

costs to a minimum. Particularly the elder generation

keep

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money

above their valuable time

hence

refrain themselves by travelling on a train or bus. Clearly, it can be inferred that the populace itself is not letting themselves be

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of

this

fastly growing

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sector all remarks to their skeptical nature.

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,

according to

nation

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survey, when asked most of the individuals

eventhough

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even though

had enough capital to

travel

by

flight

, chose using trains or buses to reach

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respective

destination

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. As it is way cheaper than the former mode of

travel

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it is crucial for them

for being

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able to save even a single penny.

To sum up

, the

flight

industry is expanding exponentially and it will continue to broaden

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horizon. More and more corporations are still working towards bridging the gap between rich and poor to make it

accesible

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accessible

for everyone. It's the

individuals

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choice to choose either

money

or their priceless time. The