Education should be free to all people and should be paid for and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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be explained in the upcoming paragraph. Education should be taught free of cost and should be

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role in every individual, most of the people are uneducated.

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provides a free course so; the poor people who have no money

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can study as well.

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population will go down,

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their personal needs. Another point, if the new generation is educated and

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knowledge,

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the property documents by saying,

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without reading the papers.

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society. To reiterate from the prefixing and suffixing, it can be concluded that the joint efforts of both

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growing concern. It is likely to control the current problem.