Some people believe that students in schools learn better when they study in groups. Other people say that students learn better when they study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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One school of thought holds that Studying in small-scale groups is the best way to
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others believe that lonely self-
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essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am
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of the latter. On the one hand, studying in small groups is beneficial in some ways.
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criticism and defense are essential skills for their future careers .
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is because of the fact that nowadays, a myriad of big companies, namely Google or Facebook, require candidates to
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express their inner thoughts and feelings
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so that studying in a group are more likely to successfully apply
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these companies. Knowledge aside,
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often have to spend a large amount of time and effort to resolve the tough problems in their exercises. In fact, when
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their own heavily
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a difficult issues, they are bored and are easily distracted by interesting things on the Internet like Video games or
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lower academic results.
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, there are a host of compelling reasons why I am convinced that it is crucial for
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to
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alone. One reason is that the enormous cost incurred to hold a
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students
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would put a strain on government coffers.
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,
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could lead to
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deficits, tax
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, or reduced social welfare, thereby forcing ordinary citizens, especially the underprivileged, to struggle even more to earn a living. Another reason is that
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in technology bring benefits for studying.
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breakthroughs in education,
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a large of resources on the Internet,
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as Google or ChatGPT, and
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could greatly boost their knowledge. In conclusion,
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it is irrefutable that studying in a small-scale group is advantageous to a certain extent, I am convinced that those
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alone benefit the most.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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