Some people believe that students in schools learn better when they study in groups. Other people say that students learn better when they study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One school of thought holds that Studying in small-scale groups is the best way to

study

,

whereas

others believe that lonely self-

study

is a better option.

This

essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am

Change preposition

in favor

show examples

favor

Change the spelling

favour

show examples

of the latter. On the one hand, studying in small groups is beneficial in some ways.

Firstly

criticism and defense are essential skills for their future careers .

This

is because of the fact that nowadays, a myriad of big companies, namely Google or Facebook, require candidates to

have to

Verb problem

apply

show examples

express their inner thoughts and feelings

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

so that studying in a group are more likely to successfully apply

in

Change preposition

to

show examples

these companies. Knowledge aside,

students

often have to spend a large amount of time and effort to resolve the tough problems in their exercises. In fact, when

students

studing

Correct your spelling

studying

in

Change preposition

on

show examples

their own heavily

expose

Wrong verb form

exposed

show examples

a difficult issues, they are bored and are easily distracted by interesting things on the Internet like Video games or

movie

Fix the agreement mistake

movies

show examples

, which could

be caused

Wrong verb form

cause

show examples

by

Change preposition

apply

show examples

lower academic results.

On the other hand

, there are a host of compelling reasons why I am convinced that it is crucial for

students

to

study

alone. One reason is that the enormous cost incurred to hold a

small-scaled

Correct your spelling

small

show examples

group

for

Change preposition

of

show examples

students

would put a strain on government coffers.

As a result

,

this

could lead to

budge

Correct your spelling

budget

show examples

deficits, tax

hike

Fix the agreement mistake

hikes

show examples

, or reduced social welfare, thereby forcing ordinary citizens, especially the underprivileged, to struggle even more to earn a living. Another reason is that

advanced

Replace the word

advances

show examples

in technology bring benefits for studying.

This

is because

technical

Change preposition

of technical

show examples

breakthroughs in education,

students

could

study

by

Change preposition

with

show examples

a large of resources on the Internet,

such

as Google or ChatGPT, and

this

could greatly boost their knowledge. In conclusion,

while

it is irrefutable that studying in a small-scale group is advantageous to a certain extent, I am convinced that those

should

Correct pronoun usage

who should

show examples

study

alone benefit the most.