Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

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Dear Harry, I am writing an appreciation letter for your

book

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was helped me in the

presentation

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. When my boss gave me a task of

presentation

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I was bewildered because I didn't material to present in the meeting. But you recommended a

book

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which really helped in my

presentation

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Besides

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this

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, the marketing topic was well defined in the

book

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which helped me to identify the main points.

However

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, there are some essential notes highlighted by me to go through before my work.

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presentation

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had an important role in my next promotion because if I do not give a good

presentation

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my promotion will not happen.

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, my communication skills were

also

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supported by

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book

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and I feel that my speaking skills quite improved. I will consider buying my own

book

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for my personal development in the future. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

mobinadurrani43Sat Oct 28 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure a clear structure and organization of ideas in the letter.

coherence cohesion

Revise the greeting and closing to make them more formal and appropriate for a letter.

lexical resource

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grammatical range

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

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