You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you faced What should be done
Dear Mr. Josaph Muran,
I am writing to notify you
the
unfortunate events Change preposition
of the
happened
during my stay in the ABC Correct pronoun usage
that happened
hotel
,New York during your Capitalize word
Hotel
company facilitated
meeting.
On November 10, Add a hyphen
company-facilitated
2023
I Add a comma
2023,
have
attended the meeting as per your invitation to provide feedback about your newly launched products. My accommodation Unnecessary verb
apply
arranged
by your company for two days in Add a missing verb
was arranged
ABC
Correct article usage
the ABC
hotel
on the
Park Avenue Correct article usage
apply
street
.
Capitalize word
Street
Although
it is a reputed hotel
, they could not provide a
suite room which you booked for me. I was informed that there was maintenance Correct article usage
the
at
the suite room, and it can not be provided. As an alternative Change preposition
in
solution
they offered me a complimentary dinner. On the second day, Add a comma
solution,
Correct article usage
the aircondition
aircondition
of my room Correct your spelling
air-condition
was
suddenly stopped and they could not Unnecessary verb
apply
solved
the issue until 9 Change the verb form
solve
at
the evening. Change preposition
in
Threfore
I have moved to another Correct your spelling
Therefore
hotel
at
the same street.
As per the manager of ABC Change preposition
on
hotel
, they will refund the amount to your company as you are the one Capitalize word
Hotel
booked
it. Correct pronoun usage
who booked
Therefore
, Please consider to refund to
me the amount which I paid for the stay on 11. I have attached the Change the verb form
refunding
hotel
bill.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfull
Jennifer Correct your spelling
faithfully
Lopuz
Correct your spelling
Lopez
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task response
Ensure the letter addresses all the required points mentioned in the task prompt.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the ideas and paragraphs in a more logically structured manner.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary and use more specific and varied language.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structures and grammar, and aim for a higher level of accuracy.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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