Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists in today's world. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,the debate over whether

entertainers

are more important than

scientists

often surfaces.

While

both are important in our society as they ensure a balance between having fun and getting things done,it is difficult to tell which one is more valuable than the other. In my view,

scientists

are offering a lot to the world and sacrificing their time and energy to make the universe a better place for us.To illustrate, over the years they made a variety of inventions

such

as

electrecity

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electricity

,

telephone

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the telephone

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,

or

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and

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the interenet

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interenet

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Internet

.Currently, it is hard to imagine a world without those creations, they are considered

as

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necessities.

Furthermore

,they

also

contribuate

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contribute

to

create

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other

usuful

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useful

objects in order to make life easier for us.

Although

,

scientists

can participate in experiments that can hurt the universe.

On the other hand

,

entertainers

such

as musicians,dancers, and athletes can have a huge impact on our society because they can be

advocate

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and defend certain causes,and that can help

raising

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awarness

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awareness

due to

their influence on people .

However

,there are different ways to reach that goal.

For instance

, we can use social media and create

contents

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content

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to raise

awarness

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awareness

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or teach it in schools in order to have an educated generation that will recognize the

diffrence

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difference

between right and wrong without needing help.

To sum up

,academics and

entertainers

have a huge bounce in today's world,

each

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one of them is helping us with something.

For example

,

scientists

are

contribuating

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contributing

in

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to

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the development of the glope,

while

performers and athletes are making us feel better and escape reality in order to manage stress and problems in our lives.

Nevertheless

,a life without

scientists

is worthless.We can use their

reaserch

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research

to have the amusement we are looking for,which means they can be replaced.

For

this

reason,I think

scientists

are more important than

entertainers

.