The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of
income
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which is spent on
petrol
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by residents in the United States and the United Kingdom
Overall
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, most people in The United States spend more on
petrol
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than in the UK. In the
USA
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the poorest spent most of their
income
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to pay fuel bills,
while
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the reverse was true for the richest. In detail, in the
USA
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, the poorest people spend 4% of their
income
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to pay the
petrol
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bill which is twice as much as of proportions spent on
petrol
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by the richest.
While
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in the middle-
income
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in the
USA
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, they spent around 4% to 5% on transport. In terms of the UK, the opposite trend with the
USA
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is that the poor spent more than 5% of their total
income
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on
petrol
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.
This
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is followed by the middle-
income
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and richest group which
was
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spent only 5% to 4% and 4% to 2.5% on
petrol
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respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, petrol, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditures
  • disparities
  • evolved
  • fluctuations
  • stabilization
  • significant gap
  • trends
  • economic conditions
  • vehicular technology
  • public transportation
  • summarise
  • comparison
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