Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed , rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self- employed?
In the past
decade
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decade,
people
choose
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have chosen
working
rather than to work for someone in companies. Many choose Verb problem
apply
this
type of working
for several reasons and Replace the word
work
feel
more Fix the infinitive
to feel
independence
. I strongly support Replace the word
independent
people
who show willingness for working
as self-employed. In Change preposition
to work
this
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it will be discussed about advantages and disadvantages of Add a comma
essay,
this
issue.
To commence with, it should be considered that there is
no official rules and security for self-employed. Change the verb form
are
For example
, people
may come to Correct article usage
apply
the
work late and there is no punishment system for them. Correct article usage
apply
In
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As
result
, it may lead Correct article usage
a result
some
lack of Change preposition
to some
dicipline
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discipline
whereas
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apply
people
will lose their work ability. Moreover
, it concludes with either unsuccessfull
results or demotivated workers' sadness.
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unsuccessful
In addition
, there are several benefits of self-employed
like work-life balance and creating both Add a missing verb
being self-employed
nice
and cosy environment for working. Correct article usage
a nice
people
can choose their working hours whereas
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which
it
will make flexibility for them. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, they can arrange working hours and in
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as
result
they can spend time with family and other activities. improving motivation is the most important aspect of Correct article usage
a result
this
type of working
.
in conclusion, nowadays working as self-employed is ranging up from simple business Replace the word
work
till
huge companies. In my opinion, it has as many Change preposition
to
psoitive
effects Correct your spelling
positive
for
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on
people
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