The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph illustrates the conclusions of a questionnaire five Australian cities' residents about what
coffee
and tea purchasing and drinking habits they had in the
last
two weeks.
Overall
, the largest proportion of individuals went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
four weeks in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart,
while
most people in Adelaide wanted to buy instant
coffee
during that time. The citizens of Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart with approximately 60% were the greatest in drinking
coffee
or tea in the
coffee
shops and contrasty, Adelaide persons with just under 40 per cent were smallest.
Moreover
, The trend to instant
coffee
consumption was larger than fresh
coffee
in all cities which was more or less 50 per cent. Looking at the figures in the chart it is obvious that shopping for fresh
coffee
has the least deal between the three indexes. In
this
case, the minimum number belonged to Brisbane (33%) and
in contrast
, Sydney had the maximum value (43%).
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