Global warming is one of the biggest threats human faces in 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at an alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?

What
qualification
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qualifications
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will you get after the
Program
? -I get my
master
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master's
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degree in
this
field and become more
confidence
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confident
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and do my own business in future or may get a good offer from
the
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a
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big company. When does the
Program
start and finish? -The
program
starts in June 2024 and
finish
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finishes
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in August 2026. What are the modules/subjects of the
Program
? What are the core modules and optional of the
course
and Why &
how
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and how
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will it benefit you Elaborate please -There are some compulsory
module
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modules
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such
as Flying Start Leadership
Program
, Strategy and the Competitive Environment, Global Perspectives on Human Resource Management and Leadership Communication, Marketing Management and International Accounting for Managers.
This
type of
subjects
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subject
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increases my skills and knowledge. - How is the
course
structured and how is it assessed? -The
course
designed
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is designed
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mainly
teaching
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for teaching
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. Teaching is carried out through lectures, seminars, guest speakers, article discussion
group
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groups
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, and presentations. Did you do any research before choosing the
university
and
Program
? -Yes, I have done lots of research on the Internet platform and various ways
finally
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to finally
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decide
this
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on this
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university
and particular
program
. Do you know the total cost of your
course
? -Yes,
total
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the total
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cost of the
course
is 25,020. Who is going to pay your tuition fees? Who is paying your living costs? If
you
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your
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parents
are paying your tuition fees you may be asked: -I will pay my tuition fees and living costs. I am
independence
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if
found
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I find
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trouble
at
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apply
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that
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apply
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time my family members
support
me. What do your
parents
do? -My father is no more and my mom is doing
house work
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housework
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. Who else do your
parents
support
? -I
support
myself and
also
my mother will
support
me. Where did your
parents
obtain the money to pay for the
course
? -I take bank
loan
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loans
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either secured or unsecured. If you have a loan, you may be asked how you plan to pay
this
back -I will do
part time
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part-time
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job with my study
also
if required my family members will
support
me. You may be asked if you are planning on working, whether you know how many hours you are -I would like
working
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to work
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only 4 hours to manage my living
expense
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expenses
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and loan amount. allowed to work, and how much you are likely to be paid -As per the UK government rules and regulations I will work. Living in the UK -I would like to live in the UK for
the
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a
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long time. 
Here
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Where
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is the
university
located? -
University
located in England. Where is your
accommodation
-Still I do not have
got
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apply
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my
accommodation
stay
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apply
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. What is the distance to
university
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the university
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from
accommodation
-I do not have yet confirmed my
accommodation
.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • sea levels
  • alarming rate
  • flooding
  • coastal areas
  • biodiversity loss
  • displacement
  • agricultural lands
  • soil fertility
  • saltwater intrusion
  • food security
  • renewable energy sources
  • emission
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate-smart agricultural practices
  • water efficiency
  • coastal defenses
  • sea walls
  • flood barriers
  • conservation
  • restoration
  • ecosystems
  • mangroves
  • salt marshes
  • coral reefs
  • storm surges
  • CO2 absorption
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