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qualification

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qualifications

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will you get after the

Program

? -I get my

master

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master's

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degree in

this

field and become more

confidence

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confident

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and do my own business in future or may get a good offer from

the

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big company. When does the

Program

start and finish? -The

program

starts in June 2024 and

finish

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finishes

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in August 2026. What are the modules/subjects of the

Program

? What are the core modules and optional of the

course

and Why &

how

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and how

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will it benefit you Elaborate please -There are some compulsory

module

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modules

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such

as Flying Start Leadership

Program

, Strategy and the Competitive Environment, Global Perspectives on Human Resource Management and Leadership Communication, Marketing Management and International Accounting for Managers.

This

type of

subjects

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increases my skills and knowledge. - How is the

course

structured and how is it assessed? -The

course

designed

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mainly

teaching

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for teaching

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. Teaching is carried out through lectures, seminars, guest speakers, article discussion

group

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groups

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, and presentations. Did you do any research before choosing the

university

and

Program

? -Yes, I have done lots of research on the Internet platform and various ways

finally

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decide

this

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university

and particular

program

. Do you know the total cost of your

course

? -Yes,

total

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cost of the

course

is 25,020. Who is going to pay your tuition fees? Who is paying your living costs? If

you

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your

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parents

are paying your tuition fees you may be asked: -I will pay my tuition fees and living costs. I am

independence

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found

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I find

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trouble

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that

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apply

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time my family members

support

me. What do your

parents

do? -My father is no more and my mom is doing

house work

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housework

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. Who else do your

parents

support

? -I

support

myself and

also

my mother will

support

me. Where did your

parents

obtain the money to pay for the

course

? -I take bank

loan

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loans

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either secured or unsecured. If you have a loan, you may be asked how you plan to pay

this

back -I will do

part time

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job with my study

also

if required my family members will

support

me. You may be asked if you are planning on working, whether you know how many hours you are -I would like

working

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only 4 hours to manage my living

expense

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and loan amount. allowed to work, and how much you are likely to be paid -As per the UK government rules and regulations I will work. Living in the UK -I would like to live in the UK for

the

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long time. 

Here

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Where

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is the

university

located? -

University

located in England. Where is your

accommodation

-Still I do not have

got

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accommodation

stay

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apply

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. What is the distance to

university

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the university

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from

accommodation

-I do not have yet confirmed my

accommodation

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
8
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

448 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

global warming
sea levels
alarming rate
flooding
coastal areas
biodiversity loss
displacement
agricultural lands
soil fertility
saltwater intrusion
food security
renewable energy sources
emission
greenhouse gases
climate-smart agricultural practices
water efficiency
coastal defenses
sea walls
flood barriers
conservation
restoration
ecosystems
mangroves
salt marshes
coral reefs
storm surges
CO2 absorption

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